The Vision of My Life

A New Friend in My Life



A new friend in my life



Who

Wakes me up

With his sweet tone,

Makes me comfortable

When I’m alone!


Pings me

All the time,

Holding my hand

Every time!


Couples me

With my world far away,

Dances with me

All the way,

And follows me

In every way!


Sits beside my pillow

When I sleep,

Sings for me

When I weep!!


Plays with me

When I’m bored,

But slays me

When I’m ignored!



Loving him

For ever!

And losing him

For Never!!



Yeah! about

My lovely Mobile!

Which without,

Nothing is noble!! 



 Dedicated for all Passionate Lovers who got addicted to their Mobiles :)

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15 Responses so far.

  1. Humesha aapke saath :)

  2. I'm sure this sentiment resonates with a lot of people.

  3. Hemal says:

    I am addicted to mobiles so much that I carry 4 every day!! Three Nokias and one LG!! Tell me if any one can be more addicted to mobiles..

  4. Karthik says:

    Yeah.. it happens.. sometimes materialistic things become so important in our lives.. mobile is one such.. good one.. :)

  5. So kind of you Vyankatesh..

    @PC: A lotta ppl especially Indians !! :)

    Hemal Ji !! Thoda jyada ho gaya! I dono how cud u manage all .. Baap re!

    Yea Karthik, Lyf style of a typical indian is changing !!!


    And Thank you alll :)

  6. Rimly says:

    Lovely poem. I was getting ready for something else. LOL! Yeah I too am addicted to my mobile!
    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/04/one-of-those-days.html

  7. Smitha says:

    Good twist at the end vysh....

  8. bhargavi says:

    nice yar, i dont know up to now, that u r such a good poet, i know that u loves the people very much,but now i came to know now that u will love "not only people but also belongings " very good keep it up, and congrats

  9. Thankyou Rimly.. But I dint get u, was getting ready fr somthing else ??

  10. asha says:

    vry nyc to see gd poetry from u ..i felt nyc n soo gud :)

  11. U r cho chwwet.. ThankQ AsJo... :)

  12. pramod says:

    yea true, now guys would pray, to be born a mobile and sit beside a gorgeous lady.

  13. Kruthi says:

    i agree pramod.. well framed poem vyshu..:) luv u more nw!!!;)

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